Sunday, February 20, 2011

Student Response













Cheese

I questioned to see the curl bending beneath your smile,
age turning us mad through our farm haze.
The haste in yout finger reckaged for mine,
bringing beauty to the veins that surge our existence.

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I adore the poem that Ms. Emily Sexton wrote! It is so simplistic and fun together! I liked how short it was, it really worked well for the poem. I loved her use of description throughout the poem and i liked how she had a slight rhyme scheme without it being obvious!!!

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